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The troubled chapter 1 by marilynmonro22333, literature

The troubled Intro by marilynmonro22333, literature

The lonely man by marilynmonro22333, literature

The troubled chapter 1 by marilynmonro22333, literature

The troubled Intro by marilynmonro22333, literature

The lonely man by marilynmonro22333, literature

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  • Apr 16
  • United Kingdom
  • Deviant for 12 years
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Hey guys! It's me AnnaMaria! Weird name I know... but those are my parents for you. You wouldn't picture someone who lives in London to have that name. I write poems, stories, songs and take photo's I love nature. I have 2 dogs a Husky named Vivvy and a Golden retriever named Pinocchio (He's had a big nose since he was a puppy!) Then one Persian cat named Snow white! Ah disney characters! thats a little about me! Also I love fashion I dream of being a fashion designer or model! But I don't think I'm to pretty for that... maybe just maybe. I'm 16 years old just turned it and can't wait to get my punch buggie for christmas! Its going to be pink! and tinted windows beautiful I know (: I'm a total shopaholic! My best friend's name is Alice and my boyfriends is Shane! we've been together for 2 years! He's actually the one who bought me Vivvy. Alright buh bye! Can't wait to check out you're work and for you to see mine! Chow!

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Well, I was going through :icon1053goose: her gallery and I saw this ------>[link]<----- poem and you commented,

"...This is NOT a poem at all... I also looked at you're other work that you called a poem both are not poems. None of them have similes or metaphors. There more like words you just felt like saying, honestly I think you need to go on a website and look up poems or how to write one and then come back to me and tell me to read it because you can not expect people to fave such sloppy work. I don't mean to offend you but this is very sloppy. Being honest thats all."

It is poetry. There are many different styles of poetry out there. The style she was writing in her poem was called Blank Verse. It is known as probably the most common and influential form that English poetry. So she did write a poem.

Also in this----->[link]<------ picture you said,

"Honey, you were so cute in the before picture... why hide yourself in black and goth? Life is about expressing your true self... and goth is just a way to hide your feelings... just by seeing all of your other pictures of you, i can tell your a funky person. Don't change it. Even if your friends are turning goth and emo, (which most of this generation is, sadly.) When you get to be older and show your kid pictures of you being Gothic... Your children will think of you differently and might follow you as Gothic. Don't let that happen. Don't be a follower. Be a leader."

You said "life is about expressing your self... and goth is just a way to hide your feelings..." That IS how she is expressing herself. She is goth. That is how I express myself. I want to wear dark eye makeup and dark clothing. She wants to wear dark eye makeup and clothes.
You have no clue what she has been going through the past couple months.
Really, no CLUE! Her life literally feel a part on her. That is why she is like that. I would tell you what happened but I'd rather not publicize it.
She is my best friend and I really don't know what has been going on.

Also, you said, "Even if your friends are turning goth and emo, (which most of this generation is, sadly.)"
Is it a problem with you if we are. This is who we are and want to be. I am sorry people can't be bubbly and friendly and girly as you want them to be.
And she isn't emo, emo is a type of music. She is NOT a type of music.

I don't wanna make you mad or anything, but it is her and who she wants to be. You are not her mom. She can do whatever the hell she f eels like doing doing.

It is people like that who bother me. The people who tell other people what to be like or what to look like. We are who we want to be. Not what YOU want us to be. You are not her or anyone else. You are you and I am me.

Also on this picture of me, [link] you said,
"Darling! dress up a bit! Your GORGEOUS! Take advantage of your beauty, put on some color full make-up and put on a really cute outfit!"

I didn't think twice about what you were saying. I don't like colorful makeup, I don't like cute outfits.
I like dark makeup and dark, baggy clothing. Then you replied after I said something,
"Oh no problemo! You really are something. If you dressed yourself up a bit you could potentially be a model babbydoll."

So, you're saying that I can't me a model the way I am?

And if you hide this comment or block me or don't reply to me. I just want to let you know that I am stronger than that.
I won't block you if you aggravate me (well if it is something you said anyways) I will reply to you, I don't hide comments. I just know that if I do that I am getting weaker and shallower.
Thanks again for a fave!
Thanks for the watch and welcome to DA
No thank you for letting me enjoy your stories doll face!
Thanks for the watch too!! :D :heart:
Welcome to DA!!! :D